Showing posts with label clean read. Show all posts
Showing posts with label clean read. Show all posts

Monday, November 27, 2023

El Tiburón's New Look


Once upon a time a publishing company took a risk and published El Tiburón. I can hardly express how excited I was. But as time went on I began to sense that my action-packed crime novel wasn't a good fit for their mostly romantic works. It floundered. The books I published myself did well while El Tiburón got dusty. I finally decided to dissolve the contract and they surprised my by doing it for me.

Now I can sell it in the McGee Series along with Save the Girls (#1), Counterpart (#2), El Tiburón (#3), In the Crossfire of Revenge (#4), and Piratessa (#5).


So this meant re-publishing El Tiburón myself and getting a new book cover designed. As a promotional starter, I have set the price at Smashwords.com as "Reader Determines The Price." So if you want it for free, go for it. If you want to pay for it, then by all means do so... please :)


Review it at whatever site you got it from... I need reviews.

Tuesday, November 12, 2019

Susan Miura Book Review

Shards of Light by Susan Miura
Review by H. Schussman

Reader’s POV:
Miura pulls the reader through two young ladies’ lives… exciting adventure and heartbreaking tragedy. Each must learn from their situations.
Shilo has inherited her great-grandmother’s gift of healing. This gift is fragile and powerful. Shilo has to learn when to use it and how to make sure she gives credit where credit is due—God. Her time in Sicily is an opportunity to learn from Nonna Marie and to become embroiled in yet another life and death adventure.
Back home, Melody watches her most cherished dreams as a ballerina crash about her damaged body. Her struggle from anger and self pity to acceptance and new dreams is both painful and encouraging to read. Amidst this is her desire to learn who her biological mother is without hurting her sweet real mother.
Best friends, Shilo and Melody grow in maturity, faith, and womanhood. They both learn what true romance is with their respective boyfriends.

Writers POV:
This is a fast read… a page turner. The language of the young adults is modern and relevant, yet the writing is clean and almost poetic at times. Miura masterfully describes the scenery, action, and emotional angst. Here’s some random favorites:

*  “Can I go with you?” His [a little boy] hope-filled eyes stare as though a blink might ruin the possibility of a “yes.”
*  The green, earthy scent of rain-washed garden mixes with lemonade air.
*  My eyes remain closed. I refuse to acknowledge her perky existence.

At first I struggled with the changing POV between Shilo and Melody, but Miura clearly marked the shifts and I soon adapted. It’s especially tricky because Miura writes in first person for both characters. And present tense. It’s not an easy writing style, but she carries it off well.
Great mix of long and short sentences, with a few illegal ones thrown in for good measure. Well done and enjoyable young adult novel.

I received this copy in exchange for an honest review.